The slow progression of corruption and the misery it spreads, and how one woman takes it upon herself to do something about it, is what makes this such a brilliant use of the prompt.
The "evil" king was dead long before their empire turned to tyrany. However, the lords keep telling the peasants the king is alive just so they could blame him for all the atrocities they commit.
The man who strides in is haggard and unkempt. He looks at you with a dead-eyed expression and a look of utter despair.
"So, uh, here goes," he says. "People say you have some kind of power. And I just... I'm wondering if you can check my red string."
"Of course," you say. The request is not unusual. "I'll even tell you who's on the other side, if you like."
You find the start of the string and motion for him to follow. He trails behind you wordlessly, his eyes glued to the floor.
Outside, you can see the string disappear into the horizon.
"We'll take my car," you say.
You drive down the road in silence, following the twists and turns of the string. Sometimes you lose sight of it and have to retrace your steps. It's a bit difficult to pinpoint one string in an area full of people.
Finally you reach a residential building. The string goes straight into the walls of the third floor.
"We can stop," the man whispers. He sags in his seat and buries his head in his hands.
"You recognize this building?" you ask.
He nods quietly.
You touch his shoulder gently. "Then why--"
"It'll never work," he mutters. "My roommate, he's so... Oblivious."
You tilt your head. "Have you shared your feelings?"
He laughs. "So, so many times. He just doesn't get it. He doesn't think... Two guys..." He sighs and shakes his head in resignation. "I need to move out."
"You don't have to explain it," you say gently.
"Do you want to come in for some tea?" he asks.
You nod.
You walk up the stairs behind him. The string pulls taught as you reach his floor. You walk down the hallway, glancing at the various apartments, and pause at the door that the string leads to.
"Why are you stopped over there?" he says. "I live over here."
You blink, then follow him. He hesitates at the door. "I think he's home," he says.
"He can't be. The string leads down the hall," you say.
He opens the door. "Oh. Hey, roomie," he says.
His roommate waves back.
He gestures for you to sit.
You shake your head. "I have to tell you something," you whisper.
"Don't worry, he's got a headset on and he can't hear you right now," the man says.
"He's not your soulmate," you say.
"What?" he squawks.
You look at the string. It pulled taught straight into the wall.
"Come out to the hallway with me," you say. You knock on the door the string leads you to.
The man who answers says, "Oh no. Is your roommate being dumb again?"
Your client hesitates. He experiences a moment of realization.
"Oh. Y-yeah," he says.
"I got your favorite snacks," says the man who answered. "Also I need to share this new show with you. I know you'll love it."
Your client looks at you uncertainly. You smile.
"Oh, you're, um, welcome to join too," the man who answered says.
"No, you two have fun," you say with a knowing smile.
Your client smiles. "Thanks."
Some say that an invisible red string is tied around the fingers of soulmates meant to be together forever. As it turns out, you can see these red strings, and have therefore created a highly successful matchmaking business.
The crowd screamed and ran at the sight of Hero's monstrous transformation. Hero roared, a pained and animalistic sound. Their shaking hands grew to long and sharp claws. Their teeth, jagged and pointed.
Hero cautiously approached a mirror mounted on the wall, terrified by what they might find. They recoiled at the beast that stared back.
They fled, out the doors and into the crowded streets. More people screamed. Someone threw a can, and they yelped. Shots rang out.
"The beast is getting away!" Someone cried.
They darted down an alleyway, and they kept running until they felt well and truly alone.
Or, so they thought.
"Ah, so you're the one they're after," said a voice in the shadows.
Hero bristled. They knew that voice.
"Oh. Oh my," Villain whispered reverently, stepping into the light. "You're marvelous."
"It went this way!" A voice cried.
"You're not safe here," Villain said. They threw open the doors to an abandoned warehouse. "Quick, inside."
Hero scrambled into the warehouse doors, up the wall and into the ceiling rafters.
The Villain shouted, "It went the other way!"
The angry voices receded, and Hero momentarily relaxed.
Villain closed the doors and all looked around. "Well, that's not ideal."
Hero shrank back into the shadows. Villain couldn't see them.
Villain ran to an intercom mounted near the doors.
"Listen up," Villain called over the intercom. "My pet is loose somewhere in this warehouse. Whoever brings them to me unharmed receives a little bonus."
Their lackeys sprung into action, running back and forth along rows of shelving and in and out of the various shipping containers littering the warehouse. A few ran into each other in their haste.
"Where did you go?" Villain muttered, scanning the ceiling.
They locked eyes with Hero, who bristled.
"They're on the ceiling nearest the compactor," Villain announced over the intercom.
Hero jumped down and scampered across the concrete flooring. Two lackeys tried to head them off, and they ran towards a set of stairs. Two more lackeys blocked their path, and they jumped off the stairs and darted over the shelving, toppling boxes in their wake.
"Boss, they're too fast!" One of the lackeys complained.
"Get the tranqs," Villain said.
Darts whizzed by as Hero tried to shake their pursuers. They cursed themselves for seeking asylum from a villain of all people.
They dove down to a set of doors and launched at them, but they wouldn't budge. They looked for some kind of lock or obstruction, but too late.
Something hit their shoulder. They tried to wrench it out, much too late.
They snarled as Villain approached them.
"Sorry, darling, but I can't have you tearing apart my warehouse," Villain said.
Hero realized they were laying down. They tried to get up, but they suddenly felt so, so weak. Villain knelt down and pet them gently, peering into their terrified eyes. They tried to nip at the Villain's hand, but that didn't seem to deter them.
"Rest now," Villain said.
Hero whined and went limp.
Part 2
Beautiful arc and a good sense of weight
jumping fishboy :3
also quality is bad as before womp womp :c
You see their name on caller ID. Tears form in your eyes. You collect yourself and pick up, only to hear the line disconnect.
"It's so much faster," they said. "It cuts out the grunt work."
"That's not the point," you seethed. "That was never the point. You're exploiting others for your own convenience."
"I'm just ahead of the curve."
"No, you're avoiding the messiness of self expression. You can't be bothered to live."
"I'm so sick of your personal attacks," they snap. "Everyone does this. EVERYONE. You're just living in the past."
"No, I want to live in the future. I want life to be worth living in the future. Where does the need for growth and efficiency stop?"
"So you want to live without modern conveniences?"
"No. No. I just want the growth and efficiency to translate to rest, play, and creativity. It isn't. We've lost so, so much. And for what? An endless stream of banality drowning out the passion that made it possible?"
"You're not being realistic. That's not the world we live in."
"I have to be unrealistic. I can't forget the potential of the world. I know what the world could be and I'm so tired of settling for less."
Villain drove slowly on the dark, ice-covered roads, their eyes searching frantically. Hero fought with Supervillain and barely managed to escape. They had to find Hero before Supervillain.
They'd installed a tracker on Hero's phone, and this was Hero's general location, but they were nowhere to be found.
They could be lying in the snow, bleeding out, or worse.
They rolled down the windows and tried calling Hero's phone. The cold air stung their eyes. They drove back and forth until at last they heard Hero's telltale ringtone.
They leapt out of the car and dug through the snow.
Their stomach dropped.
Just the cellphone.
For the next two hours they called out for them, frantically digging through snow and circling the area for clues or footprints.
Then a thought struck them.
Supervillain must have them.
Supervillain must have kidnapped Hero.
It was only a matter of time before they did something horrible to them. They had to act fast.
Villain nearly lost control of their vehicle in their haste to return to base.
They left the car running, dashed inside. They had to suit up, grab a weapon and some supplies--
"Whoa, whoa, hey, what's the hurry?"
The villain froze.
Hero emerged from the shower, steam rolling out behind them, wearing cozy pajamas and a towel on their head.
"Yeah, things got really bad with Supervillain. Mind if I crash here?"
Villain stared at them, wild-eyed and speechless.
"…Maybe I should've asked--"
"Why," the villain croaked, "Don't you have your cellphone on you."
The hero blinked. "Oh, shoot, that? Yeah, I had to ditch it because someone tried tracking me. Why, did you call?"
Villain stared at them a little too long, their eyes a little watery. "I, uh, got snow in my eye," they said, and brushed past them into the shower.
"O-oh, okay! I'll make you some hot cocoa!" Hero called.
Hero picked a movie for them to watch. Villain returned puffy-eyed and unusually quiet, and refused to let go of their hand the rest of the night.
You don't even have to write responsibly yall, and best of all it's free
did you know that you can write what you want and no one will stop you
Peter stared warily at the creature towering above him, nursing his many wounds. "My ex sent you, I'm guessing," he sighed.
"Yes, Master," the horrible monster said.
Peter cursed. "Okay, fine," he said. He tried to stand on what he thought was the better of his two legs, and fell back in a cry of pain.
The monster gingerly gathered him and picked him up.
"Yeah, could you take me to the hospital?" Peter grunted.
The monster nodded.
Two wolf men blocked their path.
"The boy stays, ugly," one wolf man growled. "Or do you think you can take us both?"
"I'll make you regret interfering with us," the other said. "Just wait until--"
But the second wolf man didn't finish as the monster's fist hit him squarely in the stomach and sent him flying. The other wolf man puffed up and yelped.
The monster held up his fist again, and both the wolf men turned tail and ran.
Peter sighed, non-plussed. "I could've done that," he muttered.
"Yes, master," the monster said.
"Oh, shut up," he pouted.
They reached the hospital, but the monster couldn't quite fit in the entrance.
It was then Peter saw her approach.
"Great work, my lovely," said Angelica. She plucked a gem from the monster's eye.
The monster smiled, then dissolved into a pile of mud. Peter fell unceremoniously on the ground.
"Peter, darling, it's wonderful to see you, truly it is. I've been worried sick," Angelica said. "No phone calls, no notes, nothing."
Peter groaned. "I've been a little busy," he said. "Also I broke up with you. Many times."
"And now you have..." Angelica held the gem and seemed to scrub the air. "What was that, werewolves after you? Bad form, Peter, fighting dogs."
"Well, wolf men," Peter corrected. "They stay in that form all the time." He again tried to stand and regretted the effort.
"Oh, Peter, please try to rest," Angelica sighed. "I'll fix everything." She slipped into the building. Peter could see her talking and gesticulating at him through the glass.
Peter stared up at the sky, willing himself to be struck down by lightning.
A horrible monster has been following you for a while now. It finally has you cornered. You hear it speak. "Master… I've finally found you…"
The Monster of Sentan is an excellent story to be compared to! In my mind this was a continuation of another writing prompt I'd started.
"I knew he was afraid of my conquering army, but I didn't think he would be stupid enough to leave you behind." "Oh, no, you quite misunderstand. Your army's already dead."
"Do I even have a purpose?"
"You're the reason I'm tolerating this world at all."
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