I Used To Fall For This Trap Like, A Stupid Amount. I Was So Worried About Being Repetitive In My Writing

I used to fall for this trap like, a stupid amount. I was so worried about being repetitive in my writing I forgot to make it easy to comprehend. And the more I thought about it the more I realized that I never noticed when writers only used a characters name unless I was actively looking for it.

The POV thing is such a great way to put it and it really helps you to immerse yourself in the world of the character. Plus, if a character is mentally referring to someone as “the doctor” you can have a fun moment with the shift from using that to their actual name when the MC finally learns what it is.

using a descriptive pronoun ("the doctor" referring to a doctor who has already been named, "the brunette" referring to a brunette who had already been named) is simply bad writing. it creates a momentary rift in reader comprehension and does not help the story in any capacity. don't do it

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11 months ago

I love not paying attention. I love tapping out of situations and things

Anyone Else Notice That The ‘Come Here To My Bedroom And Have Sex With Me’ Face That RSL Does In
Anyone Else Notice That The ‘Come Here To My Bedroom And Have Sex With Me’ Face That RSL Does In

Anyone else notice that the ‘Come here to my bedroom and have sex with me’ face that RSL does in the Last Days Of Disco is pretty much the same expression he gives House at the end of Black Hole…

just saying…

This blog is pro tits and anti Nazi

11 months ago

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My Coworker Put His Two Weeks In And Then Decided To Weld His Name Into Our Work Table. I Should Add

my coworker put his two weeks in and then decided to weld his name into our work table. i should add that when confronted about it he claimed he didn’t even know how to weld despite having and being paid for having a welding license

heya

Heyaaaaa

Arthur Morgan my beloved

COMN FANFIC WRITERS !!

COMN FANFIC WRITERS !!

11 months ago

What do you mean I have to go to work? A new chapter got published and I simply must lie in bed and read it now

Must I have career goals? Can I not simply read fanfiction?


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