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Harry Potter Rewrite: Help!
Iโve been outlining more or less what I want the final result for my Harry Potter rewrite to look like but Iโm stuck on two outcomes of Hariโs childhood:
NOTE: I have a headcanon in which the Potters are Indian, so James names his son Hari. I think I mentioned this before, if I didnโt, feel free to ask about it.
Petuniaโs marriage starts falling apart when Lily dies.
Vernon didnโt let her go to her sisterโs funeral because he was sure that the place would be crawling with โfreaksโ. Even if Petunia begged, he would still prevent her from going.
Vernon made nasty comments about Lily and Jamesโ death, saying that theyโre two less freaks to worry about.
Eventually Petunia leaves her husband and moves back in with her parents (who are alive in this version).
Petunia decides to go to college, a decision supported by her parents since they promised to help her financially and with the boys.
She studies to become an English teacher.
She loves her job. Also, she might fall in love with the History teacher.
She remarries, and itโs a man who treats her right and is good with the boys.
Both boys are treated equally while with her.
Dudley and Hari get along well. Although whenever Dudley returns from his weekends at his fatherโs, they fight a lot.
Hari grows up knowing heโs a wizard and knowing (more or less, because Petunia didnโt have all the details) what had happened to his parents.
Many moreโฆ
Remus, along with several other people who believed Sirius was innocent, start protesting and putting pressure on the Ministry so that they can give Sirius a proper trial.
Sirius is renamed innocent.
Dumbledore still refuses to hand Hari over to them, even though they were the rightful guardians of the child.
The last straw is when Dumbledore casually corrects them and says that Hariโs name has been changed to Harry.
They whitewashed his name. They were livid.
Remus and Sirius, along with some handpicked friends to help them, manage to kidnap Hari.
They take him to Wales, further away from Remusโ former home. They cast an insane amount of spells to hide themselves from Dumbledore. They were untraceable.
Other than the protections needed, they lived a muggle life.
They have other children (the names Iโm still working out), thereโs five kids in total.
Two of those children are werewolves, attacked at a young age by another wolf pack thatโs not Fenrir Greyback. TheyโRemus, especiallyโwanted to bring them comfort when he found out about them.
Hari lives in a loud, chaotic household in the middle of nowhere.
Lyall Lupin eventually moves in with them because Remus worried for his fatherโthe man was old and alone.
And many moreโฆ
NOTE: The outcome of the votings will determine the overall plot of Hariโs era. Choose wisely, what do you want to see?
Hey, same anon about trans!fleur.
Maybe a trans!cedric ?
I mean, his father would be so proud of his SON and how HE's so amazing in school/quidditch ?
Give us supportive parents of queer kids, please!
Thanks for your hardwork and amazings ideas!
I actually never thought so Trans!Cedric and I am honestly going to say that I love it so much. Cedric having loving and supportive parents? Yes please!
Cedric wouldnโt be the only queer kid who has supportive parents, since one of the main themes in my series would be discovering and coming to terms with oneโs identity so Iโm excited.
And thank YOU for the awesome idea! And to everyone else whoโs also joined me in my journey, I love yโall!!
Hi, what are your thougths about Draco Malfoy? I really like your rewrite, but I always feel like Draco could be like, the catarsis of a familiar chain. The one who survived his family toxicity and became a better person. I'm just saying he had potential.
Hey Anon! I apologize for taking a bit to respond, I havenโt been on Tumblr very much. But this is an excellent question, so thank you for the opportunity to discuss it!
Draco Malfoy is a complex character. He comes from a rich family that are proud members of the Sacred Twenty-Eight, who followed the Dark Lord until they couldnโt anymore. From afar, many would think that theyโre the perfect example of evil people. However, as we look closer, all we see is fear.
We see Lucius trying to protect his son whenever Voldemort put him on the spot. We see Narcissa going behind the Lordโs back to protect her child. We see Draco being forced to do a lot of things out of fear and out of wanting to keep his family safe.
I believe that Draco really was as obnoxious as we meet him as in the first book/film. But, like all children, he grew up. As the war intensified, his actions became less about getting a reaction out of Hari and more about keeping himself and those around him aliveโwhich is something that Hari fails to see at first.
I like the idea of Draco getting a redemption arc, but I donโt think it would be easy for him. I mean, sometimes I imagine him attempting to disappear into the muggle world for a few years where he learns a lot more about the world and himself. Who knows what he might have done during that time? Worked at a bakery shop? Maybe.
In my visions, though, Draco always comes back to the wixen world and becomes a Healer. He apologizes for his wrongdoings and is actively looking to make things better.
Do Hari and Draco become friends or more? Iโm not sure yet, but it certainly doesnโt happen until a couple of years after the warโs over.
On a somewhat different note, this is one of the things I love about the rewrite. I get to explore so many different family dynamics and how the kids respond to it. Some people change for the better, others for the worst, and others donโt change at all. Itโs interesting to see how I slowly watch them unfold and bloom.
SOMEONE TO STAY; Chapter Two.
โ ๐๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ถ๐ด ๐ฅ๐ช๐ฅ๐ฏโ๐ต ๐ณ๐ฆ๐ด๐ฑ๐ฐ๐ฏ๐ฅ. ๐๐ฆ ๐ฅ๐ช๐ฅ๐ฏโ๐ต ๐ธ๐ข๐ฏ๐ต ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ช๐ฏ๐ฌ ๐ข๐ฃ๐ฐ๐ถ๐ต ๐ฉ๐ฐ๐ธ ๐ญ๐ช๐ง๐ฆ ๐ธ๐ฐ๐ถ๐ญ๐ฅ ๐ฃ๐ฆ ๐ธ๐ช๐ต๐ฉ๐ฐ๐ถ๐ต ๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ณ ๐ฃ๐บ ๐ฉ๐ช๐ด ๐ด๐ช๐ฅ๐ฆ ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ณ๐บ ๐ฅ๐ข๐บ. ๐๐ฐ๐ธ ๐ธ๐ข๐ด ๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ข๐ฏ๐ต ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ด๐ถ๐ณ๐ท๐ช๐ท๐ฆ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ณ๐ฆ๐ฆ ๐ฎ๐ฐ๐ฏ๐ต๐ฉ๐ด ๐ธ๐ช๐ต๐ฉ๐ฐ๐ถ๐ต ๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ณ? ๐๐ฉ๐ฆ๐บโ๐ฅ ๐ฏ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ณ ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฏ ๐ฃ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ฏ ๐ข๐ฑ๐ข๐ณ๐ต ๐ง๐ฐ๐ณ ๐ข ๐ด๐ช๐ฏ๐จ๐ญ๐ฆ ๐ฅ๐ข๐บ, ๐ต๐ฉ๐ณ๐ฆ๐ฆ ๐ฎ๐ฐ๐ฏ๐ต๐ฉ๐ด ๐ง๐ฆ๐ญ๐ต ๐ญ๐ช๐ฌ๐ฆ ๐ข๐ฏ ๐ฆ๐ต๐ฆ๐ณ๐ฏ๐ช๐ต๐บ ๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ฅ๐ช๐ฅ๐ฏโ๐ต ๐ธ๐ข๐ฏ๐ต ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ฆ๐น๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ณ๐ช๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ค๐ฆ. ๐๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ฑ ๐ฅ๐ฐ๐ธ๐ฏ, ๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ธ๐ข๐ด ๐ข๐ธ๐ข๐ณ๐ฆ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ข๐ต ๐จ๐ฐ๐ช๐ฏ๐จ ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ด๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ข๐ณ๐ข๐ต๐ฆ ๐ด๐ค๐ฉ๐ฐ๐ฐ๐ญ๐ด ๐ธ๐ฐ๐ถ๐ญ๐ฅ ๐ช๐ฏ๐ฆ๐ท๐ช๐ต๐ข๐ฃ๐ญ๐บ ๐ค๐ฉ๐ข๐ฏ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ช๐ณ ๐ณ๐ฆ๐ญ๐ข๐ต๐ช๐ฐ๐ฏ๐ด๐ฉ๐ช๐ฑ, ๐ฏ๐ฐ ๐ฎ๐ข๐ต๐ต๐ฆ๐ณ ๐ฉ๐ฐ๐ธ ๐ฎ๐ถ๐ค๐ฉ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ๐บ ๐ต๐ณ๐ช๐ฆ๐ฅ ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ณ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ข๐ช๐ฏ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ด๐ข๐ฎ๐ฆ. ๐๐ฆ ๐ฌ๐ฏ๐ฆ๐ธ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ข๐ต ๐ด๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ธ๐ฐ๐ถ๐ญ๐ฅ ๐จ๐ณ๐ฐ๐ธ ๐ข๐ฏ๐ฅ ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ต ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ฐ๐ฑ๐ญ๐ฆ ๐ด๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ธ๐ฐ๐ถ๐ญ๐ฅ ๐ณ๐ข๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ณ ๐ด๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ฅ ๐ต๐ช๐ฎ๐ฆ ๐ธ๐ช๐ต๐ฉ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ข๐ฏ ๐ฉ๐ช๐ฎ, ๐ข๐ฏ๐ฅ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ข๐ต ๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ธ๐ฐ๐ถ๐ญ๐ฅ ๐จ๐ณ๐ฐ๐ธ ๐ข๐ด ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ญ๐ญ ๐ข๐ฏ๐ฅ ๐ง๐ช๐ฏ๐ฅ ๐ฉ๐ช๐ด ๐ฐ๐ธ๐ฏ ๐ญ๐ช๐ง๐ฆ๐ด๐ต๐บ๐ญ๐ฆ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ข๐ต ๐ฎ๐ช๐จ๐ฉ๐ต ๐ฏ๐ฐ๐ต ๐ฎ๐ข๐ต๐ค๐ฉ ๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ณ๐ด. ๐๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ง๐ถ๐ต๐ถ๐ณ๐ฆ ๐ต๐ฆ๐ณ๐ณ๐ช๐ง๐ช๐ฆ๐ฅ ๐ฉ๐ช๐ฎ, ๐ข ๐ฑ๐ญ๐ฆ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฐ๐ณ๐ข ๐ฐ๐ง ๐ธ๐ฉ๐ข๐ต ๐ช๐งโ๐ด ๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ฅ๐ช๐ฅ๐ฏโ๐ต ๐ธ๐ข๐ฏ๐ต ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ณ๐ฆ๐ด๐ด. . . โ
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I think Arthur would be everyoneโs favorite grandpa. His own grandchildren would probably cringe a bit, but the muggle kids would feel SO proud to have impressed such an adorable old man. I think theyโd bring him some of their favorite, most mundane muggle objects just because Arthur would understand the hype and geek out about it together. Itโs not what Arthur intended, but once he realized how good it made these kids feel, he just allowed everyone to call him grandpa. Everyone is his grandchild now.
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1. James Potter
Steps:
Get a white sheet
Cut eyes and a mouth into it
Put it over your head
It should turn out a little bit like this:
Failing that, you could also buy a skeleton costume and wear that. You will still look like James Potter!
Also, probably the best thing about this costume, it will also work if you want to be one of the following characters:
Remus Lupin
Sirius Black
Regulus Black
Lily Evans
Cedric Diggory
Nymphadora Tonks
Marlene McKinnon
Dorcas Meadowes
Fred Weasley
Colin Creevey
whats your opinion on percy weasley? i'd love to see him get fleshed out more in your rewrite!
You know, originally, I didnโt care much for him. But the other day someone asked for my opinions on the Weasleys (check it out here), and a discussion on Percy surged from there.
Now, I think that because Percy was a kid born when things were most intense in the war, thereโs got to be a lot of repressed trauma. Like, Molly and Arthur already had Bill and Charlie, so thatโs three kids they needed to protect from everything. Three kids who didnโt understand what was happening and why Mom and Dad are always so paranoid and stressed and exhausted. I talk about some of this here.
I think Molly taught her kids to be quiet at all times, especially when hiding, and to be obedient because otherwise bad things can happen. And I think Percy was the most obedient and quiet of the three, and he was often praised for it. But then, when the war ended, he got stuck in the war mindset.
While the world was slowly moving on and mending itself, Percy continued being the perfectly quiet and obedient child who followed the rules down to a T. His older brothers didnโt have time to dwell on the past, they were too busy helping Molly around the house, and the younger ones never had to experience what they did, not really, anyway.
So he gets made fun of when he fusses over the rules, or when he brags about his accomplishments (which I think he does because now heโs not being praised as much as he used to, and is now desperately competing with his siblings for that kind of attention), or when he says that he wants to work in the Ministry.
SO, I think Iโm going to have Percy have that big fight with his parents, but I want to also find a way to make them understand that he wasnโt entirely wrongโhis execution couldโve been betterโbut he was also hurting and he was very determined. He wanted to do good, he believed in the Ministry, whom he watched clean the streets after the war.
I think thatโs it for now, any more ideas are welcomed :)
EDIT: I also want Percy to end up with Oliver Wood because Iโve been shipping them for so long and theyโd just be an awesome couple. PERCIVER FOR LIFE!!
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