Sometimes it's useful to look at your dialogue and ask yourself, "would a real human being talk like that?" But it's also good to ask the follow-up questions of "would the way a real human being talks sound good here" and "does this character actually talk like a real human being or are they weird about it."
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also what’s with the narrative that when there’s a disabled body it has to be fixed? Implying that it is not right the way it is.
Not every disabled life is a physically painful experience.
Disability is natural, disability happens. The difficulty of being disabled by an outside world that barely adjusts to your needs is the problem, not the disabled body.
A lot of suffering disabled people go through is made up of people not caring/looking out and the societal idea that a disabled body is a broken body that has to be pitied.
I will die on this hill.
That’s so fucking real, literally I’m stuck in the middle RIGHT NOW
I know the beginning of the story, I know the end of it.
BUT THE MIDDLE
OMG WHY DOES THE MIDDLE HAVE TO BE SO SO HARD TO WRITE!?!!??!?!!?!?!?
-a writer
I feel like some of you guys think "bad art" is like someone gluing rhinestones to a water melon, or a guy who made his own armchair out of Ohio license plates, or a trashy romance novel where someone says "the blue-eyed one kissed the brown-eyed one," when in reality bad art is a 1000000 Billion Dollar movie where none of the workers got paid and every single creative decision was market tested to see how lucrative of a profit it could foreseeably make to wow shareholders.
There's two kinds of crows that visit our yard.
Funky little guy on his stupid walk for his stupid mental health.
And
I HAVE SEEN EMPIRES RISE AND FALL AND YOURS IS NO DIFFERENT
And we love them both.
My everyday battle consists of stopping myself from holding anyone hostage and explaining my entire book to them
Someone: So what is your novel? Middle grade? YA? Adult? NA?
Me:
ugghh uaahhfh aaafdhhf a I write about war. Constantly in the trenches. You’re safe and wanted here.
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